The Crying Game, 1993
Summary
of Film
Fergus: Stephen Rea Dil: Jaye Davidson
Jody:
Forest Whitaker
Jude: Miranda Richardson
Adrian Dunbar
Bartender: Jim Broadbent
Written and Directed: Neil Jordan
1.
THE SET-UP.
0:24
Title sequence. ELS of
carnival. Setting is Northern
Ireland. Music begins: "When a man
loves a woman, can't keep his mind on nothin' else . . ." Camera pans under a pedestrian bridge across
a river. Ferris wheel turns in the
distance. Song
continues.
CHAPTER 2
High angle of Jody and Jude. Jody wins a big white teddy bear at a ring
toss. "And that's cricket!"
he exclaims. He's a black Englishman
wearing Levi's. She is a white Irish
woman wearing a Levi jacket and tight short skirt. "Jody's never offended," he remarks at one point. He
walks away with her. He hugs her
tight--apparently he has just met her at the carnival. Note in the right of the frame a small man
(Fergus) wearing a black jacket watches them from a distance. He follows them
left across the frame. He is dressed in
a peacoat. His black hair is long and
disheveled. Jody goes to the outdoor
bathroom--which is inside a small tent.
Fergus, the man in black, watches him--from his pov. Jude holds his hand while he pisses inside
the tent. "Never pissed while holding a girl's hand, Jude," Jody
says. She shoots a look at Fergus. He grimaces. "It's nice," he says when he comes out. Then he kisses her passionately. Fergus watches them. She drags Jody away--an invitation to more
foreplay. He follows her away from the
carnival. Camera at high angle as they
walk away into ELS range.
2.
THE KIDNAPPING. 4:40
Exterior
scene past the pedestrian bridge far from the carnival scene. Jude leads Jody under a railroad
bridge. Fergus crosses the pedestrian
bridge: he's following them. Jude flops
down on a soft spot among some fishing nets for the sexual encounter.
"Come and get me, soldier."
He falls on her and begins to kiss her and pull at her crotch. Suddenly Fergus is upon them. He cocks his weapon. Jody looks up. Fergus kicks him in the face and Jody falls off Jude. Two other men come out of nowhere. One pulls a black hood over Jody's
face. The men pull him up and drag him
across the bridge. Camera moves right
to show Jude running away in the distance.
3. THE SECRET LOCATION
5.48
In
the back seat of a small car. Jody is
lying in the back between the seats.
"What's your name, soldier?"
"Fuck you!" Exterior
shows the car pulling into a remote location, what appears to be an abandoned
farm. A motorcycle pulls in behind the
car. Inside the building, we see Jude
is the motorcyclist. She takes off her
helmet and her long hair falls loose.
The kidnappers are gathered around.
The leader, Peter, announces, "You're being held hostage by the
Irish Republican Army." He notes
the threat: after three days, either one of the IRA men held by the English
will be let go, or this British soldier (Jody) will be killed. "Give him a cup of tea," Fergus
says.
Later,
Jude comes in with some tea and sandwiches.
She asks Jody if he wants some.
Jody sits with the hood over his face.
But he doesn't speak.
4.
THE MAN IN THE HOOD. 7.46
Interior
of a greenhouse next to the building.
Fergus and Jude are watching Jody that night. He holds the light on Jody.
Fergus asks Jude, "What's he like?" "Horny
bastard." "Did you give him
it?" "There's certain things
I wouldn't do for my country."
Fergus asks her to "poke him," to see if he is all right. He's concerned because Jody hasn't moved in
twelve hours. "Go on. Have a heart." So Jude stands over him and kicks him with
her foot. She leans forward and lifts
the hood a few inches. Cut to another
view of the two--suddenly Jody leaps to his feet, the hood flies off, and he
lands on top of her (although his hands are held by handcuffs). "You fuckin' bitch!" he
screams. He is face to face with
her. Suddenly two men are pulling him
off her. They put the hood back over
his head.
Jude
stalks outside and squirms in disgust that this man touched her. Fergus comes out. "Fuckin' animal," she snaps. He comes over to her and consoles her. "Tough work that is," he says. "It's a breeze. I just thought of you," she says. She turns toward him and kisses him warmly.
CHAPTER 4.
5. "THANK YOU,
HANDSOME" 9.56
Exterior
scene next morning. Fergus leads Jody
out to a greenhouse on the property.
Inside, Fergus sits across from and urges him to eat something. Finally, Fergus lifts the hood a bit and
hands him some of a candy bar. Jody
squirms and cries, "This is a farce!
I seen your fucking face!"
"So what do I look like?"
"You're the one about 5'10" and the killer smile..."
(Reaction shot Fergus) "... and the baby face. And the brown eyes." Fergus looks shaken by this last
detail. Cut to Jody: You're the handsome one." Reaction shots of Fergus: she smiles. Fergus gives him more food. "Thank you, handsome." "My pleasure."
Later
that day Jude comes in with a tray of food. Jody pleads with Fergus to take off the hood. "If we take the hood off, we have to
shoot you," Jude says. "Can't
we take it off," Fergus asks Jude.
She tells him to check with the leader.
Fergus
asks Peter, the leader, if he can take the hood off. "He's seen our faces."
Peter says okay--as long as Fergus is the only one he sees.
CHAPTER 5
6. JODY INTRODUCES FERGUS TO DIL
13:13
So
Fergus relieves Jude and takes the hood off.
Music up. High angle of
Jody. He looks up at Fergus. Note backgrounds of the two men: the brick
wall behind Jody and the tangled vines behind Fergus. Jody sucks air and blinks as he looks up into the light. "Thank you, soldier." Fergus stands apart from him. Jody kids him and says Fergus isn't as good
looking as he said before. "You're
no pinup." "Are you trying to
hurt my feelings?" We can hear the
sound of a helicopter passing by. Jody
says he knows they will kill him.
"They'll let him out," Fergus says (about the IRA man they are
trying to trade for Jody). Jody says it
isn't the nature of "your people" to let him go. "What the fuck do you know about my
people!" Fergus challenges. Jody
screams, "It's not in your nature to let me go."
Jody
changes the subject. "I didn't
even fancy her." He's talking about
Jude. "She's not my type,"
Jody says. Cut to Jody. He waves his head. "Come here." He
wants to show something to Fergus.
Fergus moves toward him. Then we
see them together in the frame. Notice
how the camera tilts to the right to create an oblique angle. Fergus reaches inside Jody's pocket and
takes out his wallet. He holds his gun
at Jody's head. Music up. Fergus takes out a picture--Jody in a
cricket uniform. "There's
another," he says. "Now she's
my type," he says.
Cut
to an insert CU of the photograph of Dil and Jody. Dil is an attractive black woman. Cut to the two-shot.
FERGUS:
She'd be anybody's type.
JODY: Don't
you think of it, fucker!
FERGUS:
Why not?
JODY: She's
mine. Anyway, she wouldn't suit
you.
FERGUS:
No?
JODY: Absolutely
not!
FERGUS:
She your wife?
Insert close-up of the photo.
JODY: I
guess you could say that.
Wide shot of the two men, oblique
camera angle.
FERGUS:
You make a nice couple.
JODY: Don't
I know it.
FERGUS:
So what were you fuckin' around for?
JODY: You
fuckers set me up.
Fergus
moves away from Jody again, and we reestablish the parallel cutting of the
earlier section. Jody tells the story
of how Jude entrapped him. He met her
in a bar. But he is angriest about being
sent from England to Northern Ireland as a soldier. Why did he sign up for the military? "It's a job." He complains that he was sent "to the
one place where they call you 'nigger' to you face." "Don't take it personally," Fergus
says. Fergus seems to enjoy this interaction.
He
moves closer to Jody. Now he is sitting
next to him (a pillar between them) and the two men argue about what is the
best game in the world, the English cricket or the Irish hurling. The two men are facing in the same direction. Fergus isn't holding the weapon on
Jody. Then Jody tells Fergus about how
he was taught cricket by his father.
"So when you come to shoot me, Paddy, remember you're getting rid
of a shit-hot bowler." Then Fergus
stands up and moves to the chair in front of Jody. "And by the way, it's not Paddy. It's Fergus." Jody
looks surprised at this revelation.
JODY:
Nice to meet you, Fergus.
FERGUS: My pleasure, Jody.
Fergus puts the wallet back in Jody's
jacket and leans back in his chair.
Jody smiles at him.
CHAPTER 6
7. "IT'S ONLY A PIECE OF MEAT."
That
evening. Exterior scene. Fergus leads Jody out so that Jody can take
a pee. "You're going to have to
take my dick out for me, aren't you?" Jody says, when Fergus refuses to
release him from the handcuffs. Fergus
reluctantly reaches toward him and unzips his fly. In a close shot we see Fergus slightly behind Jody. He reaches forward again to remove Jody's
penis from his underpants. Then he
stands back. Jody smiles and asks
Fergus to hold his hands so that he can lean forward and not dribble over
himself. Jody leans forward and
pees. "Now that is worth waiting
for!" Jody jumps up and down to
drop the last dribbles. "It's
amazing how these small details take on such importance." Cut to Jody. "Now put it back
in." Cut to Fergus. He looks even more uncomfortable. "Give
us a break." "It's only a
piece of meat!" Jody says.
Close-up of Fergus as he reaches around to put Jody back together.
Cut
to a wide shot as Jody marches back to the greenhouse. He seems ebullient, talkative. Fergus can't shut him up. Inside, Fergus sits across from him again. "Sorry. I know that wasn't very easy for you." "The pleasure was all mine!" Camera begins to circle around the two
characters. They laugh uproariously.
Cut
to Peter walking angrily toward the greenhouse. Inside we see him in the background between Fergus and Jody.
"What the fuck is this?" "He just took me out for a pee,"
Jody says. Fergus puts the hood back on
him. Peter slams Fergus for
fraternizing with the enemy. He tells
Fergus to get some sleep. He'll watch
the prisoner.
CHAPTER 7.
8. THE SCORPION AND THE FROG
22.35
Fergus
comes into the greenhouse the next morning.
He carries a tray of food. Peter
becomes outraged when he learns that Fergus told Jody his name. He orders
Fergus outside. Peter upbraids him for
his conduct. "You will have
minimum contact with that prisoner.
Tomorrow we may have to shoot him!"
Fergus
returns to the greenhouse. He walks
over to Jody. We see them in the same
shot. "There's two kinds of
people. Those who give and those who
take." Fergus raises Jody's hood
and shares some of his breakfast with him. "Two types. The scorpion and the frog." Jody tells the story:
JODY:
A scorpion wants to cross the river.
But he
can't
swim. He goes to a frog, who can. He
asks
for a ride. Frog says, "If I give
you a
ride
on my back, you'll go and sting me."
The
scorpion
says, "It won't be in my interest to
sting
you, since I'll be on your back and we'll
both
drown."
Fergus has moved away from Jody now and
stands with his back to him. But he is
listening.
JODY:
The frog thinks it over and accepts the deal,
takes
the scorpion on his back, braves the
waters--
Fergus moves farther away. He is alone
in the frame.
JODY:
--halfway over feels a burning spear in his side, and realizes the
scorpion
has stung him after all--
Fergus moves behind a tall shelf for
pots in the greenhouse. The camera
tracks in closer to Fergus. We can see
him framed behind the shelf.
JODY:
--and as they both sink beneath the waves, the
frog
cries out--
Fergus now turns to look directly at
Jody. Then reverse angle, Fergus' pov,
and we see Jody small and vulnerable in the distance--
JODY:
--"Why did you sting me, Mr. Scorpion?!" So now
we
both will drown! The scorpion replies, "I
can't
help it. It's in my nature."
Reverse angle, reaction shot of Fergus.
FERGUS: So what's that supposed to mean?
JODY: It makes sense.
Reverse angle, same shot of Jody from
Fergus' pov:
JODY: A scorpion does what's in its nature.
Reverse angle. Fergus begins to move toward Jody.
JODY: Take off the hood man.
FERGUS:
Why?
JODY: Cause you're kind. And it's in your nature.
Notice again the tangled vines above
and behind Fergus in this reaction shot.
He stares long and hard at Jody.
Then he moves toward him. The
camera tracks with him until we see them together in the frame. He lifts the hood from Jody's head. Music up.
Jody blinks in the light and smiles.
"See. I was right about
you. Reaction shot of Fergus:
"Don't be so sure." Back to
Jody: "Jody's always right."
Reaction shot of Fergus--his face is a mask of uncertainty.
CHAPTER 8
9. TWO MEN IN THE CONFESSIONAL.
26.24
Interior
of the greenhouse later. High angle
wide shot. Camera comes down and begins
to track in on the two men. Fergus is
seated with the back to the pillar between Jody and him. In effect, Fergus' back is turned away from
Jody. Jody remains in the chair.
JODY:
Where would you like to be now, man?
FERGUS: Doesn't matter where.
JODY:
If this shit was all over...
FERGUS:
Havin' a pint in the Rock.
JODY:
Think of something more alluring.
Camera keeps tracking in. Fergus is shown on the far left of the
frame. Their positions are the same.
FERGUS:
Like what?
JODY:
Like having a pint in the Metro. . . and Dil's
having
a Margarita.
Camera keeps tracking in. It moves left and establishes Fergus in the
center of the frame in MS. Jody is
shown out of focus in the background.
FERGUS:
Who's Dil?
JODY:
A special friend. We've got simple
tastes, you
and
me.
FERGUS:
Yeah. The best.
JOY:
But you guys never get a break. We
do
a tour of duty and we're finished. But you
guys
are never finished, are you?
FERGUS:
We don't look on it that way.
JODY:
I often wonder how you do.
FERGUS:
It depends on what you believe in.
JODY:
What do you believe in?
FERGUS:
That you guys shouldn't be here.
Jude comes in. She tells Fergus to put the hood back on
him. "He's hot!" Fergus
cries. But he relents. "You've got no feelings, woman!"
Jody yells. She goes over to Jody and
puts the hood over him. "You're
headed for trouble, Fergus."
"He's a good soldier!" Jody says under the hood. Jude slaps the gun against the side of his
head. "I said shut the fuck
up!" She starts to leave. "He believes in the future," Jody
mutters. She leaves.
Fergus
moves close to Jody. He lifts the hood
slightly. ECU of Jody's mouth, shows
the blood from the blow. Reaction shot,
ECU, of Fergus. Music up.
FERGUS:
Is it bad?
Cut to ECU of Jody's mouth.
JODY:
Not bad. Women are trouble.
Some kinds
of
women are.
FERGUS:
She can't help it.
JODY: Dil.
She was no trouble at all.
Throughout this section we follow
parallel editing between these two extreme close-ups.
FERGUS: You liked her?
JODY: Present tense, please. Love her. . . Why
don't
you think of her, too?
FERGUS:
I don't know her.
JODY:
I want you to do something for me.
FERGUS:
What?
JODY:
If they kill me--
FERGUS:
--don't think that way!
ECU of Jody, his mouth still bloody.
JODY:
--but they will--as sure as night follows
day. They have to. I want you find
her
out. Tell her I was thinking of her.
Cut to Fergus. He is nervous, sympathetic.
JODY:
--tell her I was all right.
FERGUS:
I don't know her!
JODY:
Take her picture. Here.
Cut to Fergus. He moves toward the camera. We cut away from the extreme close-ups
parallel editing track and reestablish on a two-shot. Now the music is moving toward a climax, with its romantic
strains. Close shot of Fergus taking
the wallet from Jody's jacket. Camera
moves up. Now we see both men's faces
close to each other.
JODY:
Take the whole lot.
FERGUS:
Don't talk that way!
Jody tells Fergus where to find Dil. He asks him to take Dil to the Metro and buy
her a Margarita.
JODY:
You don't have to tell her who you are. Just
say
Jody was thinking of her--
FERGUS:
--stop it!
Fergus moves away from Jody, who now is
alone in the frame.
CHAPTER 9
10. FERGUS QUOTES FROM THE BIBLE.
30:50
Peter
comes in and addresses Fergus as "volunteer." Back inside the building, Peter announces
that their IRA counterpart has been broken by the British. "You're going to have to do it in the
morning. You okay about that?" "I'm a volunteer." Jude admits she has her doubts about Fergus,
too. Fergus asks, "Request
permission to guard the prisoner tonight.
It would make me feel better about it." Peter agrees.
"You're a good man, Fergus."
Cut
to a two-shot of Fergus sitting in front of Jody, from the latter's pov. Jody is sobbing uncontrollably. Fergus watches him with sympathy. "Don't." Music throughout. "Help me." "I can't."
Reverse angle. Jody wears the hood. "Just help me." Reverse angle. Fergus gives him a cigarette.
Music continues. Jody coughs
after taking a few drags. "Tell me
something," Jody says. Music stays
up. Cut to Jody's pov. Camera in slightly as Fergus talks.
FERGUS:
When I was a child, I thought as a child.
But
when I became a man, I put away childish
things.
Reaction shot of Jody, and camera
tracks in.
JODY:
What does that mean?
Reaction shot of Fergus. Camera keeps tracking in, so that now he is
in medium shot.
FERGUS:
Nothing.
Reaction shot of Jody. Camera tracks in so that he is in close-up.
JODY:
Tell me something, anything.
Close-up of Fergus. He is blinking his eyes and trying to hold
back the tears. Close-up of Jody.
JODY: You're not a lot of use, are you Fergus.
Close-up of Fergus.
FERGUS:
Me? No. I'm not good for much. Music ends.
CHAPTER 10
11. "YOU WOULDN'T SHOOT A BROTHER IN THE
BACK!" 34.53
High
angle of the compound. Birds chirping
in the early morning fog. Peter enters
the greenhouse. He looks toward Fergus
and clicks his weapon. He leaves. Fergus
tells Jody to stand up. He leads him
out of the greenhouse. The camera
tracks back as they move toward the camera.
Peter claps his hand on Jody's shoulder to stop him. "I wish to say
on behalf of the Irish Republican Army"--but Fergus cuts him off. "Leave him be!" He leads Jody away. Dramatic music up, with sounds of drums in
the background. Cut to tracking shot of
the two moving down a lane. "Take
the hood off. Don't let me die like an
animal." They both stop. Fergus removes the hood. They resume walking in a wide shot. "I'm glad you're doing it. You know that, Fergus?" "Why?" "Cause you're my friend!" Then the music begins to increase in volume
and the conversation turns toward whether or not Jody will try to run
away. "You won't run!" Fergus
says. "You wouldn't shoot a
brother in the back!" Jody says--and then he begins to run away. "Jody!" Fergus points the gun at him.
Close-up of Jody's hands. He has
gotten free of the handcuffs somehow. Cut to a wide shot of the two. Jody is running fast now. Soon he outpaces Fergus. Then Jody stops and turns around. Fergus stops and cocks the gun. "Don't
do it!" Jody warns. Then he runs
again. We see him on the road--and a
military vehicle bears down upon him.
Cut to Fergus screaming at him.
Cut to close shot of Jody being struck by the vehicle. Cut to Fergus' reaction shot--a look of
horror on his face. Then a wide shot of
another truck running over Jody's body.
Cut to close shot behind one of the vehicles. Several soldiers jump out.
They run past the fallen Jody, a pool of blood around his head. Fergus runs away. Cut to exterior wide shot of the greenhouse. Bullets slam into it from everywhere,
including a military helicopter overhead.
Inside the building we see Peter and Jude escape through a casement
window. Others are killed. Suddenly the buildings burst into
flames. Fergus runs through the woods.
The music reaches crescendo.
CHAPTER 11
12. FERGUS LOSES HIMSELF AND FINDS DIL.
38.46
Exterior
scene somewhere in Northern Ireland. An
old man walks his bicycle and is stopped by Fergus. They walk off arm in arm.
Later, inside his friend's house, Fergus explains that he needs "to
go across the water. I need to lose
myself for a while." So Fergus is
bound for London.
Wide
shot of a ferry going across the channel to England. Music up. Cut to shot of
Fergus doing construction work inside a building. From his pov we can see men playing cricket in the distance.
Exterior
of street. After work Fergus returns to
his apartment. Inside his room he
dresses up and sits looking at the photograph of Dil. Romantic strains of music up.
Exterior
of street. Fergus stops at Millie's
hair salon and goes inside. That's
where Dil works. He comes in just at
closing time. But Dil, a tall thin
woman dressed in a tight black outfit, takes him as a customer. Cut to a close shot of Fergus' head being
pushed back into the sink. Dil washes
his hair gently. Low angle close shot
of Dil looking down at him. Her black
hair falls to each side of her face.
Reverse angle shot, high angle, as she looks down at Fergus.
DIL:
Someone recommended you.
FERGUS:
In a way.
DIL:
Who?
FERGUS:
A guy I work with.
DIL:
What's his name?
FERGUS:
Does the water not get to your nails?
DIL:
What's it to you?
FERGUS:
Nothing.
After the wash, she is finishing
cutting his hair. He tells her he is
from Scotland. Close shots of her hands
holding the scissors. She has long thin fingers with full nails. She describes his voice as sounding like
"treacle," and he laughs.
"Nice laugh," she says.
Later, she holds the mirror behind him so he can view her work. "That should make her happy." He turns around. "Who's she?"
CHAPTER 12
13.
MARGARITAS AT THE METRO. 42.37
Dil leaves for the night. Fergus follows her. Exterior of the Metro, a pub. Dil heads for the door. Behind her Fergus watches. Inside the pub, she greets the bartender and
sits down. Fergus follows her in and
sits across from her. The shot shows
the bartender, Carl, on the right, Dil in the distance, and Fergus in the
foreground.
DIL:
See that, Carl? He gave me a look.
CARL:
Did he?
DIL:
I just cut his hair you know.
Cut to different angle of Dil,
reflected in a mirror, then back to shot of Fergus. He is caught looking again.
Medium shot of Dil.
DIL:
There. He did it again.
Close shot of Carl.
CARL:
I saw that one.
DIL:
And what would you call that one?
CARL:
That was a look.
Reaction shot of Fergus. He looks uncomfortable. The editing follows each character in medium
shot with each part of their dialogue. If no dialogue, brackets [] are used.
DIL:
Ask him to ask me what I'm drinking.
CARL:
She wants to know if you want to know what she's
drinking.
DIL:
A Margarita.
FERGUS:
[He looks up toward Carl and shrugs.]
CARL:
[He turns his back to the bar.]
DIL:
Now he can look.
FERGUS:
[He looks at Dil.]
DIL:
Ask him does he like his hair, Carl.
CARL:
She wants to know, sir, do you like you hair?
FERGUS:
Tell her I'm very happy with it. [Dil says, "He's
Scottish, Carl."]
CARL:
[He turns toward Fergus.] Scottish? [Fergus
says,
"Yeah."]
Cut to the wide shot of the three
within the frame.
DIL:
What'd he say?
CARL:
He agreed he was.
DIL:
What do you think his name might be.
CARL:
I have no thoughts on the subject.
FERGUS:
Jimmy.
DIL: Jimmy.
CARL:
Jimmy. That's what he said.
Medium shot of Dil used before. She says, "Hi, Jimmy." Cut to medium shot of Fergus used
before. "Hi, Dil."
Suddenly
another man comes up behind Dil and sits down next to her. He's Dave, and Dil doesn't seem to
appreciate his presence. "You know
what I like," he says. She walks
away. She shoots a look at Fergus, and
we see his reaction shot as he leaves, too.
Outside the metro, Fergus watches from across the street as Dave yells at
Dil and then slaps her in the face. He
follows them.
Later,
Fergus watches them from behind a fence as they walk toward Dil's
apartment. He watches her window, on
the third floor, and can see them arguing behind the drapes.
Cut
to Fergus lying in his bed in his apartment.
He is dreaming. Suddenly we see
an image of Jody dressed in his cricket uniform. He is bowling. Fergus
wakes up in a sweat.
Exterior
of the building site where Fergus works.
He watches the cricket game going on in the field across from the
site. He waves a board like a cricket
paddle, but his supervisor yells at him for not working.
CHAPTER 13
14. DIL SINGS 'THE CRYING GAME' 46.34
Fergus
arrives at the Metro another night.
Carl greets him warmly. He gives
Fergus a margarita. Carl leans toward
Fergus and says, "You came to see her, didn't you. Listen, there's something I should tell
you..." But he is cut off when Dil begins singing. Lots of applause.
47.15
Cut to Dil, who is dressed in a gold-sequined low cut dress. Her hair is up. She comes onto the stage and sings, "The Crying
Game." Some of the words include:
"I've had my share of the crying game.
First there are kisses. Then
there are sighs... Reaction shots of
the crowd show Fergus watching, other patrons looking on approvingly. One day soon I'm going to tell the moon
about the crying game. And if he knows,
maybe he'll explain. Why there are
heartaches, why there are tears, and want to do to some feeling blue when love
disappears." As she sings, she
moves her arms and hands suggestively in serpentine movements. Every move she makes is feminine and
sensual.
When
the next performer begins, she moves over to Fergus and sits at the bar. "So tell me. Everybody wants something," she says. "Not me," he
says. Then here comes Dave again, a
slick-haired conniving type. He drags
her away. Fergus watches this
carefully. Carl comes over to
Fergus. "Takes all
types." "So who's he?"
Fergus asks. Carl says, "He's what
she should run a mile from."
"And why doesn't she?"
Carl says, "Who knows the secrets of the human heart." Fergus leaves. He takes Dil's jacket and bag with him.
CHAPTER 14
15. FERGUS "LOOKS AFTER" DIL.
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He
finds them in an alley behind the Metro.
Dave is threatening her. She
struggles to keep him away. Here comes
Fergus. "I've got your
bag." He approaches Dil and Dave.
"Who the fuck's he?" Dave says.
Fergus kicks him in the groin with his knee, Dave drops to the ground,
and then Fergus puts his foot on Dave's neck.
"See. They get the wrong
idea," Dil says as she stands next to Fergus. "Cunt!" Dave snaps.
Fergus tightens his foot against Dave's neck. "What was that?"
She leans down toward Dave, and the camera tilts to the right in an
oblique angle. She slaps Dave lightly on
the face. "Go home, like a good
boy."
She
stands up and takes Fergus' arm.
"Come on, honey." They walk away from Dave. "You all right?" he asks.
"What was that all about?"
"He wants me to perform for him," she says. He looks back toward Dave. "He's getting up." "Can't leave me then, can
you?" She puts on her jacket.
Back
at Dil's apartment. Music up
gradually. They climb the steps to her
landing. "You want me to ask you
in, right?" "No." "I'm not cheap. You know
that!" Close shot of Dil. "Loud, but never cheap." Close shot reaction of Fergus. Then we hear Dave yelling. She turns to Fergus in a two-shot. "If you kiss me, it would really get
his goat." Fergus leans forward
and kisses her softly. Dave groans. Cut to Fergus and Dil as they separate. "Now if you asked to see me tomorrow,
it would really drive him insane."
"When?" "Outside
of Minnie's." She kisses him
softly.
SIDE ONE ENDS 53.04
SIDE TWO
CHAPTER 1
16.
FERGUS AND DIL'S FIRST DATE.
Exterior of Dil's shop. Fergus meets her after work and gives her
some flowers. Suddenly the blinds open
in the window behind them and her coworkers all applaud her
"catch." Then we see them at
a restaurant. "Now's the time
you're going to make a pass?"
"Must be."
Exterior
of a street at night. Fergus is walking
her home. She asks if he has a
"special friend." Suddenly a
car zooms toward them--it's Dave again.
They jump out of the way.
"The things a girl has to put up with," she says. Outside her place Fergus asks, "You going
to be all right on your own?"
"I'm not on my own," she smiles.
Inside
Dil's apartment. She is wearing a tight
black dress. Fergus looks around the
apartment. Music up. Tracking shot as Fergus looks about. Fergus examines several photographs of Jody
and Dil.
But
Dave is still causing trouble. He
stands outside her apartment and screams obscenities. Dil goes to the window.
"Talk to me!" he yells. "Sure, Dave." She begins to throw all of his clothes out
the window. She even throws out his teddy
bear. And then insult! She heaves his goldfish over the edge and
the bowl smashes to smithereens.
"Murderer!" he yells.
Back
inside, Fergus sits down next to Dil.
He looks toward a photo of Jody (wearing his cricket uniform).
FERGUS:
What about him?
DIL: He was different.
Camera tracks in on the two of
them. Dil says Jody was "as
different as it is possible to be."
Then Dil and Fergus kiss passionately.
She pulls his hand away from between her legs. She kisses his hand.
FERGUS:
Did you do that to him?
DIL: Do you want to know how I kissed him?
FERGUS:
Yes.